Sunday, April 3, 2011



Dear friends,
I am here with my first poem which I had written when I was in class 5. It was meant for my school magazine but somehow I missed the opportunity of giving it to my teacher. It was still in my diary when I thought to present it before you. Please let me know if you like it.


True Happiness

With glowing hearts
    And conscience clear,
There’s not a thing
     On earth to fear.
A good reputation,
    Appreciation of nature,
The feelings of having
    Given others some pleasure,
 All duties done,
     And a peaceful heart
 Bring true happiness
     On your part.    

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9 comments:

  1. AngelApril 3, 2011 at 4:01 PM

    its nyc.. :)

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  2. BEYOND THE SKY , LET ME FLYApril 3, 2011 at 10:27 PM

    thank you very much ..

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  3. सहज साहित्यApril 11, 2011 at 9:55 AM

    Dear Pranjal !creation is the nectar of soul. Your poem is very impressive . Proceed !

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  4. Shabad shabad April 11, 2011 at 12:06 PM

    Dear Pranjal,
    You have expressed your emotions very well in this poem. Why had you hide this for years ? A well written piece of ART.
    Well Done!
    Hardeep Aunty

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  5. BEYOND THE SKY , LET ME FLYApril 11, 2011 at 6:01 PM

    thanks a lot Kamboj uncle & Hardeep aunty...I hope in future I would be able to write much better with all the blessings of you elders....

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  6. abhiApril 11, 2011 at 11:59 PM

    Pranjal, your poem is good. keep it up!! :)

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  7. BEYOND THE SKY , LET ME FLYApril 12, 2011 at 9:49 AM

    thank you Abhi bhaiya ..

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  8. AnonymousApril 13, 2011 at 12:01 PM

    Realy Nice

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  9. BEYOND THE SKY , LET ME FLYApril 13, 2011 at 3:02 PM

    thank you ajay bhaiya ....

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